Unleash yourself
Break all the chains
Tie yourself with sky
Put the fire in your veins
Don’t try to define life
Don’t try to define self
Live the life without control
There are no fixed rules in critical games
Forget success
Forget failures
Take the path you want to take
Put the fear in the flames
Take nothing serious
Take nothing light
Control your emotions
As they are the biggest agent of pains
Don’t draw any boundary
Don’t put any curtains
You are your own alarm
Ring at your own times
5 comments:
Welcome to the Blogger's universe!!! Good first post dude...
haan bhai, badhiya hai. aapkee woh hindi walee poem bhee daal dijiye jo kuch din pehle bhejee thee.
hmmm,
well I liked the third and especially the fifth stanza...
You are your own alarm Ring at your own times
really beautiful....
although don't you think first stanza is a bit odd one out ...
in first stanza you say do everything with full conviction...
and then you say don't try to define your aim... won't it be like using your power every now and then and not applying it in proper direction....
I don't know ... I am dumb at poems so tell me if I got the meaning wrong here.
what if we use conviction in
Good one Amit!
I liked the last few lines of the English poem.
Aniket suggested some grammatical corrections.
i dont know if this is right:
"live the life ..."
It should be "live life..."
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